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« on: October 05, 2011, 11:53:14 PM »
 

John B.

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Anyone besides me right poetry?
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2011, 11:55:43 PM »
 

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Yeah, but i write like stupid poetry like ...
"Cards are great,
cards i do not hate,"

"I got my people, watching the corners, letting me know where the bitches are." - Zimos
 

Re: Poetry
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2011, 12:04:40 AM »
 

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Yep, I used to write lots of it before I began my novel.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2011, 12:54:30 AM »
 

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nice to know there are other writers here. :)
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2011, 02:56:41 AM »
 

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I have done.  I've written lots of lyrics, more than straight up poetry.
 

Re: Poetry
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2011, 09:14:02 AM »
 

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nice music is lyrics are nice. i have done mainly done romantic poetry.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2011, 11:56:50 AM »
 

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Romanic?  Hmmm... I tend to focus on things like addiction, individualism, annorexia, nihilism, teenage pregnancy, a brothel for dogs, a flower, STIs, etc.  Never got the hang of romance  ;D.
 

Re: Poetry
« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2011, 02:23:08 PM »
 

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my writing came out when i felt like i love a girl. that is what started it for me.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #8 on: May 20, 2013, 06:12:10 PM »
 

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Recent poem I wrote. Feel free to share what you think.

A woman who loves God
Desires to live for him
For me I would have been awed
my chances I thought were slim

But then I met you
beautiful and funny as you are
My feelings for you grew
though at first I kept them afar

On my mind later that year
I felt signs that we should be
though before I made my intentions clear
I prayed to God about thee

The feeling I thought would pass
though with you they stayed.
God's answer to me clear as glass
My feeling I must convey

A woman perfect for me
Loving and living for God
and to boot, so beautiful.......
,,.Krystal
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2013, 07:29:45 PM »
 

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Krystal



Sorry. I couldn't resist.

But in all honesty, nice poem! Is it based on an actual person?
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #10 on: May 27, 2013, 02:13:58 AM »
 

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Yes, her name is Krystal. I did not get your joke btw.
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« Reply #11 on: May 27, 2013, 12:10:23 PM »
 

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Yes, her name is Krystal. I did not get your joke btw.

Oh. It's from a game I played as a kid.
The main character (besides Starfox) is named Krystal.
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« Reply #12 on: May 27, 2013, 12:31:07 PM »
 

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ahh ok. But yea, this is written for someone specific.
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« Reply #13 on: June 19, 2013, 10:54:03 PM »
 

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Groomed for social appreciation,
You are the protector of flesh
with your hard outer shell.
But separate the shield from
the man and he kneels with
profane tongues;
white.
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« Reply #14 on: June 20, 2013, 03:13:47 PM »
 

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« Reply #15 on: June 20, 2013, 04:21:14 PM »
 

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Who? and no this is someone I know in the real world.
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