A few thoughts on your design:
- The color palette is refreshing and different, good work there
- I would definitely try a version with no words on the back
- To me, the 2 halves look "off balance" primarily due to the spacing of the various pips on the edges. I might suggest trying to get them going all the way around, or perhaps reducing their size slightly. Also, the club is very dark so it's creating a visual "hole" that is throwing things off
- You might need a bit more detail/texture/shading in various places to give it a bit more visual interest. The shadows are a bit harsh and overwhelming when the main red field is just plain
Good potential here, just need to do those inevitable dozens of refinement steps.