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Design & Development / Re: The second edition of the Lumberjacks
« on: January 13, 2015, 12:11:11 PM »
IMHO:
I prefer darker blue on previous variant of “black” suits.
The Ace of Clubs – I believe both fronds can’t be at such a right angle to main trunk. Try some more natural form of a tree.
The King of Spades – try to make his hair “thicker”. His hair happened to be sleeked too much.
The Queen of Hearts – Changed hair created some disproportion of her overall head. Try to add more hair to her left temple.
The Jack of Clubs – I don’t know what to say – the worst face from the deck. Something is wrong with it. I can only propose to redesign it (face and hair) form the scratch. Also I believe you can pull down a little a shirt-sleeve of his shirt (right hand).
The King of Diamonds – right hand?
The Queen of Diamonds – her arms of a dystrophic are awful (that log should broke them, actually) – stub-fingers. Try to add hair to the crown of her head and make two plaits.
The Seal is really uninteresting. Can you add an acorn (or some stump?) on it? Place the name of the deck on such acorn.
Can you try to hide “the” on the front of the tuck case in roots of the tree? It will be the deck with a small hidden element on its tuck cases![Smiley :)](https://www.playingcardforum.com/Smileys/aaron/smiley.gif)
This is really a nice deck, even better than the first edition. Good luck.
I prefer darker blue on previous variant of “black” suits.
The Ace of Clubs – I believe both fronds can’t be at such a right angle to main trunk. Try some more natural form of a tree.
The King of Spades – try to make his hair “thicker”. His hair happened to be sleeked too much.
The Queen of Hearts – Changed hair created some disproportion of her overall head. Try to add more hair to her left temple.
The Jack of Clubs – I don’t know what to say – the worst face from the deck. Something is wrong with it. I can only propose to redesign it (face and hair) form the scratch. Also I believe you can pull down a little a shirt-sleeve of his shirt (right hand).
The King of Diamonds – right hand?
The Queen of Diamonds – her arms of a dystrophic are awful (that log should broke them, actually) – stub-fingers. Try to add hair to the crown of her head and make two plaits.
The Seal is really uninteresting. Can you add an acorn (or some stump?) on it? Place the name of the deck on such acorn.
Can you try to hide “the” on the front of the tuck case in roots of the tree? It will be the deck with a small hidden element on its tuck cases
![Smiley :)](https://www.playingcardforum.com/Smileys/aaron/smiley.gif)
This is really a nice deck, even better than the first edition. Good luck.