So I've realigned the indices with the pips on all the cards. Below are the number cards (except the 10's as there hasn't been any change to those other than a minute realignment).

Thanks again guys for the feedback! I'm working on making adjustments and will hopefully post a few updates in the next day or two.

Thanks again for the feedback everyone, it's super appreciative!

I have made additional changes though the biggest changes I've made have been more of a personal design choice regarding the imagery itself.  I've been thinking about how I could make the two halves of most of the cards appear to be more intertwined but haven't come up with anything that wouldn't require me to pretty much do the entirety of the image, at least none that don't look forced.  I'll definitely have to keep it in mind though as I'd like to have all the artwork done within the next month or two.

On that note, below are some of the additional changes.

The tuck box (I got a template from Bicycle so the shape is different. I made the hexagonal pattern a little more prominent without overwhelming the image.


Hearts


Diamonds


Spades


Back of the card; added a bit to the negative space while hoping it doesn't end up looking too busy

Thank you very much for the feedback!  I hadn't taken into consideration a much of what you mentioned, especially with the pips.  I can definitely see what you mean, in my mind I knew exactly what they were but to someone who has no idea what's going on in my head wouldn't really have a clue.

I'll definitely have to be revisiting a lot of the design aspects to ensure things can be more easily read, such as that ghosted image on the number cards and the readability on the face cards.

Thanks again for the feedback, it's really appreciated!

Dan

I'm an artist and illustrator that's found a bit of a passion for creating custom cards.  I've always admired people's work on cards, especially as of late, so I figured I'd take my love of illustration and attempt my own. I'm not always the most verbose or interactive of people but I'm always open to a conversation.