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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #25 on: May 05, 2012, 02:06:59 PM »
 

Billywiz

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That design does have a ninja throwing star look to it, try a mirrored Celtic cross in the middle.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #26 on: May 05, 2012, 06:54:49 PM »
 

NathanCanadas

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Out of the 2 latest designs, I prefer the first one, but I agree with Don about the ninja star look. Maybe putting a clover in the middle would be nice, or, as Billywiz said, a Celtic cross.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #27 on: May 05, 2012, 09:57:23 PM »
 

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Out of the last 2 designs I like the first one best too. It has a mysterious look as well and it really shows depth. Great work so far!
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #28 on: May 06, 2012, 12:52:29 AM »
 

Don Boyer

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I still like the first one better with a darker center.  When I think of that kind of Celtic art, I can't remember ever seeing much of it moving in curves - it's usually straight lines and intersections.  What few curves you do see tend to be simple arcs or circles.  The third design is moving in the right direction, but a simpler cross pattern with a circle around the center, just like a Celtic cross, would look authentic and cover those seams nicely.
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #29 on: May 06, 2012, 01:20:06 AM »
 

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i really like the design !! but i prefer this 1 design to the second design .. and have you consider making this deck a marked deck and also a one way deck ??
« Last Edit: May 06, 2012, 01:20:28 AM by hawjinjian »
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #30 on: May 08, 2012, 02:03:59 AM »
 

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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #31 on: May 08, 2012, 02:44:10 AM »
 

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Added 4 more celtic designs in the corners, fixed various lighting and gave the center piece a more celtic, 3d look to it.
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #32 on: May 08, 2012, 02:59:26 AM »
 

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Very Close to final design : D Just need to teak lighting issues. Thoughts?
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #33 on: May 08, 2012, 04:42:26 PM »
 

NathanCanadas

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Just like I said on Facebook, I don't understand the color of the strips on the side. This design pleases me better but seems a bit too big to me. It looks like it is the center of attention rather than a little addition.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #34 on: May 08, 2012, 06:38:47 PM »
 

Billywiz

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I like the look of that design Sean, it now has a Celtic cross look. Maybe brighten up the gold colouriing a bit to make it stand out more and give a little contrast. Other than that I think your on your way, now show us some of your ideas for the face of the cards ;D Good job.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #35 on: May 08, 2012, 11:49:54 PM »
 

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I love the theme behind this deck! As someone who was raised Irish Catholic with a strong Irish influence in my family I can say I would love to own a few of these! As far as the latest design though, I would make the left and right branches of the cross more straight rather than the slight curve they have now.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #36 on: May 10, 2012, 01:43:41 PM »
 

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Quite an interesting look Sean. A few thoughts:

- the extra bits at the ends of each cross arm look very "messy" to me, particularly with their proximity to the card border detail. I'm not sure those are entirely necessary.
- I'd definitely play a bit with some ways to get the cross to pop off the background more. Whether that's a shadow, glow, whatever. Your design is super complex and having too many of those details overlaying each other becomes hard to visually parse
- Can you give us a full res version of things? The green background is super high contrast (almost to a jaggy point), but the cross is looking blurred and indistinct. Think you need to get those a little closer in look, perhaps just a function of rendering out a higher resolution.

neat idea though, and seeing your progression is always interesting.
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #37 on: May 10, 2012, 02:22:52 PM »
 

SeanWhelan

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Thanks everyone so much for the feedback! But remember this design is in progress so think of all these designs I'm uploading as concept art : D
This is just me getting ahead of the game while I wait for the Galvanic to print.  I have always wanted to do this time of theme so I figured why not start now.
Why this theme though? Simply put I come from an irish background. My great grandparents came straight from Ireland. I am very proud as to where I come from and the whole irish culture. Every single thing about it. Irish pride thats all : )
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #38 on: May 10, 2012, 05:26:15 PM »
 

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New update for 5-10-12 redesigned the center piece, added shadow/highlights to make it pop more and added corner designs. Keep in mind the ends of the cross are not complete. Just an update to show the progress : D
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #39 on: May 10, 2012, 05:35:07 PM »
 

NathanCanadas

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I like the center of the celtic cross very much as well as the background. However I don't like the sides and lines of the cross. It seems a bit empty to me.
« Last Edit: May 10, 2012, 05:41:31 PM by NathanCanadas »
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #40 on: May 10, 2012, 05:39:49 PM »
 

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I explained right above they were unfinished...
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #41 on: May 11, 2012, 12:55:55 AM »
 

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Each day comes closer and closer to the final image! tada gan iarracht! : D
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #42 on: May 11, 2012, 07:44:16 PM »
 

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I like what you've done in the corners Sean, If you look at the center design long enough, you can see the Celtic cross. I would still like to see the cross design pop more, maybe use the same colour as the center design all the way along the cross design ( if that makes sense  :o ). Also thin out the white boarders so there not as bold. Keep up the great work.
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #43 on: May 14, 2012, 02:07:54 AM »
 

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I think it might look better if you continued the pattern on the inside corners of the cross (bottom left and top right) to the other two inside corners, looks a bit off to only have it on part of it. Also as mentioned above I would thin out the borders a bit :).
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #44 on: May 21, 2012, 02:04:28 AM »
 

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awesome =D i hope theres leprachuns somwhere in this deck ^^
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #45 on: June 10, 2012, 04:51:28 PM »
 

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I know you're busy with shipping out Galvanic decks but has there been anything new with this deck?
 

Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #46 on: June 10, 2012, 05:03:10 PM »
 

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Not at this time : / Shipping the Galvanics is fun but crazy at the same time. As a designer, its actually great to step away from a design and come back to it later. So we'll see what ideas come to mind once I take a break after the shipping is complete : D
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Re: Bee Playing Cards Gaelic Edition *Official Thread*
« Reply #47 on: June 24, 2012, 01:00:43 PM »
 

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It's a great design, keep going :)