I like the review. Just a couple points. I also need to improve on these points myself.
IMO:
1) You talk too much
2) You should let us get a look without having to describe so much
3) They are a bit too long (more than 5 minutes gets boring)
4) You repeat yourself a lot
NO offense. Just trying to help. Personally I think "DeckReview" and "SacProductions101" 's deck reviews are a great balance!