You were indeed too slap-happy when you made it.
There was so much emphasis on bad comedy I didn't really notice any trick. If you want to show off a trick, make the trick the focus of the video, not the horrible title and not the awful patter.
Try shooting it silent. If you think silent doesn't work as well, either re-shoot it with some proper patter or edit the video soundtrack to have voiceover - since no one sees your face, there's no lip movements to match and you could be saying almost anything you want without continuity errors as long as you time it correctly.