"REVOLVE" Kickstarter preview

[alexanderliss]

So far.. What u guys think? Better or Nah?

[Fess]

These courts are interesting. Some subtle lining up of the sprockets on a couple. Kings look like they have boobs, is that intended? Aces look like they need some polish and gear work. Interesting color choices, not sold on those. The images though, fun and interesting. I like the direction you're headed with these overall.

[alvinhy]

ooooh a lot better, I like the robot most. But it seams that some of them are stretched in a weird way?
Like its not in the right ratio. its like as if they were squashed

[Don Boyer]

A bit stretched - I agree with Alvin.

Is the background drawing completely necessary?  I feel it takes something away from the art.  This is something I'd want to see in full detail.  Your court characters could be so much LARGER - there's a lot of empty space in there; put it to good use and blow up the size of the courts.  Push the background art off to the sides and make it light gray rather than black.

You need to work on shade-matching - the red of the Jack of Hearts doesn't match with the red of the Aces of Hearts and Diamonds.

Can you do something with the font you've chosen for the indices?  It's kind of bland compared with the art.  Consider drawing your own letters and numbers rather than relying on what's in the font library.

[alexanderliss]

Update... Calling it Revolve 2.0..lol

[Don Boyer]

Update... Calling it Revolve 2.0..lol

I'm seeing NINETEEN court cards and EIGHT designs that may be either card backs or Aces.  None are labeled so I can't make heads or tails of what's what.  Perhaps a description for us would be a good idea? 

I moved the topic to the Design/Dev board, since it's pretty clear that you're still in the "drawing board" stages and not ready for an immediate release with a completed design.