Need comments here please

[phantom1412]

This is me performing a rope magic.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rip_SOWvj0U

I would like to improve my performance. So any comments would be appreciate

[D_bag]

I'm not really a magician and this is the first time I ever saw rope magic and I thought what you were doing was very cool.

I think your speech or patter (I think that's what it's called) can be improved. The presentation as a whole just seemed like you were just showing off you magic instead of expressing magic if you know what I mean.

But idk what I'm talking about so you can ignore what I said.

[phantom1412]

Thanks for the comment.

About the patter, because English is not my language and I didn't write any script, so it was like... I said whatever I could think of that time. It's really hard to improve, cause focusing on speaking might make me fail on magic.

[John B.]

doing magic while talking in a 2nd language is always hard. i have done a trick to kids only in spanish, some what difficult. the thing is know what you want to say before hand and practice that while you do the trick, the patter should be the trick also.

[Billywiz]

Some very good rope effects in your vid. Yes your patter could use a little work,but over all very good. May I suggest,picking up Richard Sanders dvd call Fiber Optics Extended,it will give you some jaw dropping rope routines and patter to go along. Hope that helps.

Billy.

[phantom1412]

Some very good rope effects in your vid. Yes your patter could use a little work,but over all very good. May I suggest,picking up Richard Sanders dvd call Fiber Optics Extended,it will give you some jaw dropping rope routines and patter to go along. Hope that helps.

Billy.

Thanks for your comments. I had the DVD already
But I didn't use his routine because, I want to create my own routine.